After one FULL YEAR i have completed this piece ORZ its been so long, i don't remember what I wanted to type for the description .____. my drawing style has changed a little, but watercolor wise.... no improvement.
hai gais! bet you weren't expecting my resurrection T__T
it has been a long time since I last saw your work
anyway, critique time
I don't quite understand the concept you are putting in this piece which codenamed "Eden", you should include what do you want to say in this piece with the description.
your coloring skill is still amazing, but you should include more depth when coloring. The cloth look like cut-board setting, the water part also seem like a beautiful cloth than actually a stream.
the expression on the long haired girl is a bit weird, it seem like she's sulking
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anyway, critique time
I don't quite understand the concept you are putting in this piece which codenamed "Eden", you should include what do you want to say in this piece with the description.
your coloring skill is still amazing, but you should include more depth when coloring. The cloth look like cut-board setting, the water part also seem like a beautiful cloth than actually a stream.
the expression on the long haired girl is a bit weird, it seem like she's sulking
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Be One with the Mechanical Pencil
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It would be so perfect
If you would just fall out the window
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